1 作文
第一部分
【2016中考模拟】书面表达（本题有1小题；共计20分）
九年级学生面临着升学的压力，许多学生课间休息时依然在教室里做作业。这样
的行为会给学习带来帮助吗？初三学生就此进行了热烈的讨论，有人认为可节约时间，
多做练习，尽快地取得进步。但有人认为课间就应该到室外参加一些体育活动，这更
利于学生的身体健康。请你以“Is it a proper(适当的)way to study in the l0-minute break?” 为题，根据同学们的讨论结果用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的看法。
内容要点：
1．描述现象；
2．某些学生的观点；
3．你的看法和理由。
要求：
1．词数：80词左右。
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Is it a proper way to study in the l0-minute break?
【参考范文】书面表达
Recently we have had a discussion about whether it is a proper way to study in the 10-minute break or not. Some students believe that it can help them save time to do more exercises. So that they are able to get rapid progress. But I hold the opposite opinion. Firstly, after 40minutes' class we have been tired including our body and brain. Therefore certainly we need to have a short break. Secondly, we should get ready for the next class rather than do some exercises. The last but not least, it is a chance for us to go to the washroom.
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书面表达评分标准：
（一）评分细则
1. 本题总分20分，按5个档次给分。
2. 根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整。 3. 词数少于60或多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构及上下文的连贯性。
5. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 （二）档次划分
第五档：（18 ~ 20分） 包含所有要点，完全完成了试题规定的任务；有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑, 行文连贯，表达清楚；语言基本无误。 第四档：（14 ~ 17分）基本包含所有要点，遗漏少量次要点，较全面地完成了试题规定的任务；有较清晰的文本框架，比较多样的语法结构和词汇；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚；语言有少量错误。
第三档：（10 ~ 13分）包含大多数要点，基本完成了试题规定的任务；少许语句不通顺，语言错误较多，但不影响整体理解。
第二档：（ 6 ~ 9 分）只包含少数要点，未恰当完成试题规定的任务；多数语句不完整，语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，语言有较多错误，影响理解。
第一档：（ 0 ~ 5 分）只包含个别要点，未完成试题规定的任务；多数语句不完整或意思不明，内容不连贯，错误很多。
0分：未能传达给读者任何信息；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
【2015中考模拟】书面表达（计20分）
假如你是Linda, 上周五你在回家的路上不小心从自行车上摔了下来，路过的Mr.Smith 将你送到医院，帮你付了医药费„„。请你写一封感谢信，向他表示感谢，并邀请他周六晚上到你家吃饭。
要求：
1.
语言通顺，行文连贯，想象合理，书写格式规范； 2.
字数80—100词，文章开头供选用 I’m Linda, the girl you helped last Friday.不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m Linda, the girl you helped last Friday. I’m writing to thank you for your help.
Last Friday fell off the bike on my way to school because of the bad weather. My leg got badly injured and I couldn’t move at all. Luckily, you saw me and took me to the hospital. It was so kind of you to call my parents. You even offer the cost of the medicine . We are so moved by what you did.
Once again, I want to express my thanks to you from the bottom of my heart. And I would like to invite you to my home and have dinner together at 6:00 p.m. this Saturday. My address is 27Green Street. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes,
Linda
第二部分
【2012年】【请假条】
昨天下午Dick 在篮球比赛中受伤，医生叮嘱他卧床休息，所以无法上学《请你以Dick 的身份写一张病假条，向Mr. Green请两周的假》
【参考范文】：
Dear Mr. Green,
I'm sorry I can't go to school today. Yesterday afternoon I got hurt in the basketball match. The doctor told me to stay in bed. I'd like to ask for 2 weeks' sick leave.
(Yours,)
Dick
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【2012年】***书面表达【时事热点】
我国运动员李娜在6月4日的法国网球公开赛取得女单冠军，书写了亚洲新奇迹！李娜的成功是因为她有一个坚定的信念：相信自己！是的，相信自己，不断努力，理想就会实现！请你以“Believe in Myself” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，告诉我们你的想法和做法！词数：80左右。
温馨提示: 1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
2. 这些单词也许对你有帮助：goal, future, success, make a plan, come true
Believe in Myself _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【参考范文一】：
Believes in Myself
Everyone ha s his own dream, so do 1.1 wanted to be a writer when 1 was very young. I dream of writing famous books which arc popular with people. Some people may laugh at ray dream but I believe if I keep my goal in my mind and practice reading and writing every day, I will realize my dream in ihc future.
Maybe we can't get what we want at oncc. But believing in myself is the most important, it will m ake myself confident. Also, I must take actions and work hard for it from now on. I am sure I will succecd at last
【参考范文二】
Believes in Myself
Li Na got No.l at 2011 French Open, one of the most important tennis games in the world. We arc all proud of her. From her succcss, 1 know that if I want to achieve my dream. 1 must believe in myself. The path to success is not always smooth, there are so many difficulties ahead. At the same time, I should make the plan and wort: hard from now on. Nothing else will make me lose my heart, because I always believe in mysdf. I am sure my dream will come iruc in the future.
第三部分
中考书面表达
5 【四川省广汉市2014中考模拟试题】书面表达（满分20分）
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。注意：①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；④词数为80左右。 As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.
【参考范文】One possible version
So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
中考书面表达（29）
【四川省崇州市2014中考模拟试题】书面表达（共15分）
小组活动（group work）是我们英语课堂中的一个重要学习方式。请你根据以下图示，写一篇短文，介绍我们应如何在课堂中开展小组活动，并谈谈你喜欢或不喜欢这种学习方式的理由。
注意：1. 文中应包含所有要点；2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名；3. 开头已给出 (不计入总词数) ，你只需接着写；4. 词数：80左右。
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Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】书面表达（共15分） One possible version:
Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it . Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, we must finish the task in time. At last, one of us comes to the front to make a report.
As for me/ In my opinion/ In my view, I like the way we study, because it is very interesting and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. (I don ’t like the way we study, because
7 I think it’s boring. What’s more, I am afraid of making mistakes while talking.)
1 作文
第一部分
【2016中考模拟】书面表达（本题有1小题；共计20分）
九年级学生面临着升学的压力，许多学生课间休息时依然在教室里做作业。这样
的行为会给学习带来帮助吗？初三学生就此进行了热烈的讨论，有人认为可节约时间，
多做练习，尽快地取得进步。但有人认为课间就应该到室外参加一些体育活动，这更
利于学生的身体健康。请你以“Is it a proper(适当的)way to study in the l0-minute break?” 为题，根据同学们的讨论结果用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的看法。
内容要点：
1．描述现象；
2．某些学生的观点；
3．你的看法和理由。
要求：
1．词数：80词左右。
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Is it a proper way to study in the l0-minute break?
【参考范文】书面表达
Recently we have had a discussion about whether it is a proper way to study in the 10-minute break or not. Some students believe that it can help them save time to do more exercises. So that they are able to get rapid progress. But I hold the opposite opinion. Firstly, after 40minutes' class we have been tired including our body and brain. Therefore certainly we need to have a short break. Secondly, we should get ready for the next class rather than do some exercises. The last but not least, it is a chance for us to go to the washroom.
2
书面表达评分标准：
（一）评分细则
1. 本题总分20分，按5个档次给分。
2. 根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整。 3. 词数少于60或多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构及上下文的连贯性。
5. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 （二）档次划分
第五档：（18 ~ 20分） 包含所有要点，完全完成了试题规定的任务；有清晰的文本框架，较多的语法结构和词汇；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑, 行文连贯，表达清楚；语言基本无误。 第四档：（14 ~ 17分）基本包含所有要点，遗漏少量次要点，较全面地完成了试题规定的任务；有较清晰的文本框架，比较多样的语法结构和词汇；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚；语言有少量错误。
第三档：（10 ~ 13分）包含大多数要点，基本完成了试题规定的任务；少许语句不通顺，语言错误较多，但不影响整体理解。
第二档：（ 6 ~ 9 分）只包含少数要点，未恰当完成试题规定的任务；多数语句不完整，语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，语言有较多错误，影响理解。
第一档：（ 0 ~ 5 分）只包含个别要点，未完成试题规定的任务；多数语句不完整或意思不明，内容不连贯，错误很多。
0分：未能传达给读者任何信息；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
【2015中考模拟】书面表达（计20分）
假如你是Linda, 上周五你在回家的路上不小心从自行车上摔了下来，路过的Mr.Smith 将你送到医院，帮你付了医药费„„。请你写一封感谢信，向他表示感谢，并邀请他周六晚上到你家吃饭。
要求：
1.
语言通顺，行文连贯，想象合理，书写格式规范； 2.
字数80—100词，文章开头供选用 I’m Linda, the girl you helped last Friday.不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
3 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m Linda, the girl you helped last Friday. I’m writing to thank you for your help.
Last Friday fell off the bike on my way to school because of the bad weather. My leg got badly injured and I couldn’t move at all. Luckily, you saw me and took me to the hospital. It was so kind of you to call my parents. You even offer the cost of the medicine . We are so moved by what you did.
Once again, I want to express my thanks to you from the bottom of my heart. And I would like to invite you to my home and have dinner together at 6:00 p.m. this Saturday. My address is 27Green Street. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes,
Linda
第二部分
【2012年】【请假条】
昨天下午Dick 在篮球比赛中受伤，医生叮嘱他卧床休息，所以无法上学《请你以Dick 的身份写一张病假条，向Mr. Green请两周的假》
【参考范文】：
Dear Mr. Green,
I'm sorry I can't go to school today. Yesterday afternoon I got hurt in the basketball match. The doctor told me to stay in bed. I'd like to ask for 2 weeks' sick leave.
(Yours,)
Dick
4
【2012年】***书面表达【时事热点】
我国运动员李娜在6月4日的法国网球公开赛取得女单冠军，书写了亚洲新奇迹！李娜的成功是因为她有一个坚定的信念：相信自己！是的，相信自己，不断努力，理想就会实现！请你以“Believe in Myself” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，告诉我们你的想法和做法！词数：80左右。
温馨提示: 1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
2. 这些单词也许对你有帮助：goal, future, success, make a plan, come true
Believe in Myself _____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
【参考范文一】：
Believes in Myself
Everyone ha s his own dream, so do 1.1 wanted to be a writer when 1 was very young. I dream of writing famous books which arc popular with people. Some people may laugh at ray dream but I believe if I keep my goal in my mind and practice reading and writing every day, I will realize my dream in ihc future.
Maybe we can't get what we want at oncc. But believing in myself is the most important, it will m ake myself confident. Also, I must take actions and work hard for it from now on. I am sure I will succecd at last
【参考范文二】
Believes in Myself
Li Na got No.l at 2011 French Open, one of the most important tennis games in the world. We arc all proud of her. From her succcss, 1 know that if I want to achieve my dream. 1 must believe in myself. The path to success is not always smooth, there are so many difficulties ahead. At the same time, I should make the plan and wort: hard from now on. Nothing else will make me lose my heart, because I always believe in mysdf. I am sure my dream will come iruc in the future.
第三部分
中考书面表达
5 【四川省广汉市2014中考模拟试题】书面表达（满分20分）
俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。注意：①无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；②文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；③文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；④词数为80左右。 As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.
【参考范文】One possible version
So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.
中考书面表达（29）
【四川省崇州市2014中考模拟试题】书面表达（共15分）
小组活动（group work）是我们英语课堂中的一个重要学习方式。请你根据以下图示，写一篇短文，介绍我们应如何在课堂中开展小组活动，并谈谈你喜欢或不喜欢这种学习方式的理由。
注意：1. 文中应包含所有要点；2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名；3. 开头已给出 (不计入总词数) ，你只需接着写；4. 词数：80左右。
6
Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】书面表达（共15分） One possible version:
Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it . Firstly, we have different tasks in group work; Secondly, we discuss the topic the teacher provides; Thirdly, someone writes down the key points and forms a report; Fourthly, we must finish the task in time. At last, one of us comes to the front to make a report.
As for me/ In my opinion/ In my view, I like the way we study, because it is very interesting and useful. I can talk freely. I can improve my English. (I don ’t like the way we study, because
7 I think it’s boring. What’s more, I am afraid of making mistakes while talking.)