Write a passage based on the following topic:
Prevention or punishment, which is the better alternative in ensuring citizen safety? Requirements:
1. Pattern : introduction– some/ others believe ….-- your opinion)
2. Words: 150
3. The date to hand it in—those having intensive reading classes on Mondays: 11-14
on Thursdays: 11-10
4. Peer correction: After finishing the passage, find a classmate to correct it for you.
Correction grading standards:
Structure: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Contains a topic sentence;
Uses helpful transition signals;
Sticks to the main idea throughout.
Content: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Deals with the given topic;
Provides relevant and convincing information for the topic sentence.
Grammar: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
No unbearable mistakes (主谓一致，冠词使用，句子结构完整. 名词单复数使用正确，词性使用正确)
Language: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Uses right words to express ideas;
Writes effective sentences with variations;
Formal language.
Calligraphy: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Sum ：
Writer ： Editor ：
By the way, please respect my labor and do not copy.
Write a passage based on the following topic:
Prevention or punishment, which is the better alternative in ensuring citizen safety? Requirements:
1. Pattern : introduction– some/ others believe ….-- your opinion)
2. Words: 150
3. The date to hand it in—those having intensive reading classes on Mondays: 11-14
on Thursdays: 11-10
4. Peer correction: After finishing the passage, find a classmate to correct it for you.
Correction grading standards:
Structure: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Contains a topic sentence;
Uses helpful transition signals;
Sticks to the main idea throughout.
Content: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Deals with the given topic;
Provides relevant and convincing information for the topic sentence.
Grammar: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
No unbearable mistakes (主谓一致，冠词使用，句子结构完整. 名词单复数使用正确，词性使用正确)
Language: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Uses right words to express ideas;
Writes effective sentences with variations;
Formal language.
Calligraphy: 4’ (poorly—2; satisfactorily—3; superbly—3.5-4)
Sum ：
Writer ： Editor ：
By the way, please respect my labor and do not copy.