六年级总复习作文总结
作文一：My____ (写一个人)
My Mother
My mother come s from China. She is an accountant. She live s in Jinan. She is thirty-eight years old. She is older than my father. She is 169cm tall. She is taller than me. My mother likes cooking , draw ing pictures and listening to music. Her favourite season is summer, because she likes swim ming in summer. I love my mother!
My Father
My father is thirty-seven years old. He is strong. He is an engineer. He is very strict. Usually he go es to work by car. Sometimes he go es to work by bus. He likes sports. He likes swimming and play ing ping—pang. He likes reading newspaper and books at home. He likes listening to music, too. I like him very much!
作文二：My Family (我的家庭)
My Family
There are three people in my family. They are my dad, my mom and me. (总起) My father is 175cm. He is taller than my mother and me. He is a salesperson. He likes walking , reading books and watching news.（按序先介绍爸爸）My mother is very smart. She is an accountant. Her math is very well. She like s watch ing TV and read ing books.（再介绍妈妈）I like listen ing to music, read ing books and watch ing TV. （最后介绍自己） How interesting! This is my family. I love my family very much! （总结） 最大亮点：句式多样，思路清晰
My Family
There are three people in my family. My father，my mother and I. (总起) I am 12 years old. I live in Jinan. Jinan is beautiful. I like sports , read ing and listen ing to music. I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go by car. （按序先介绍自己） My mother is a teacher. She is very thin. She is kind. She likes read ing . She likes listening to music, too. She goes to work by bus. （再介绍妈妈） My father is an engineer. He is strong. He likes sports. He goes to work by car. （最后介绍爸爸） We are happy. I love my family. （总结）
最大亮点：语言流畅，内容充实
作文三：My Favourite Season (我最喜欢的季节) 本文以夏季的活动为主，易于仿写：
My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, fall and winter. My favourite season is summer, because I can go swimming with my friends . We can eat ice-cream and some fruit s in summer. We also have the summer holiday (暑假) . On the holiday, I can play with my friends. And we can go swimming, play basketball, and go to the park. I think summer is the best(最好的) season of a year. Oh! Summer! I love you! Can you tell me why you are so lovely? (最后一句运用独特的拟人手法，请有选择性地模仿)
本文以春天的景物描写为主：
My Favourite Season
My favourite season is spring, because spring is very beautiful. I can plant tree s in spring. I can go hiking with my family too. In spring the trees become green and the flower s are colorful. There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers . In spring, the sky is very blue. The air is fresh. The clouds are white. Oh! I like spring very much ! (“非常喜欢”这一句型一定记住very much放最后)
作文四：My Pet(描写小动物)
My Pet
I am Cindy. I have a clever pet. It's name is "Snow"（给小宠物起的名字是个不错的选择哦）, because it is a rabbit. It has white fur and two big eye s . It can play with me every day. It can jump very well. Snow likes eat ing some grass and cabbage. It is so cute and smart. I love Snow very much . This is my pet––rabbit Snow.
My Pet
I have a cute pet cat. Its name is Kate. It has black fur（皮毛是不可数名词，不用冠词）, two small ear s , two big eye s and a long tail （注意可数名词的单复数）. It like s drink ing milk and sleeping . It always sleeps all the day. It is so lovely that we all love it very much. It also loves us. I'm happy to stay together with it.
作文五：自我介绍
Hello every one, my name is Sun Chenqianxi(姓和名的首字母分别大写，其余都小写) . I’m 13 years old. I come from ShengLi Street Primary School. I study in Class 5 Grade 6. I like playing the piano, swim ming , go ing hiking and read ing a book. My favourite colour is blue. My favourite food is ice-cream, because is very tasty. My favourite season is summer, because I can eat ice-cream and swim in the sea. It is very funny. My favourite animal is my little dog, she is very lovely.
Hello! My name is Du Chunxue. I’m from China. I’m 12. I’m tall and thin. I have two black and big eye s and long hair. There are 3 people in my family . I have many friend s . I like the cherry very much, because it is sweet. My favourite season is summer, because I can eat ice-cream and it tastes good.(有陈述有原因，很有说服力) The wolf is my favourite animal. I usually get up at 6:00. Then I go to school by car at 7:00. On Saturday morning, I climb mountains with my father sometimes. This is me!
Hello! My name is XXX. I’m slam, but I am strong. I want to be an astronaut ，a teacher or a swimmer. My biggest dream is to be a billionaire. My favourite subject is English. I think English is interesting and easy. My English teacher is very active, kind and smart. I like her class, because in her class I can learn some knowledge. So I’m good at English. I like play ing sport s and read ing book s . My hobby is collect ing lea ves . Do you think I’m a wonderful girl?
作文六：My Weekend(一般现在时)
此文句式统一，便于仿写，绿色为作文框架。
My Weekend
Hello! I’m a girl. （总起）I am busy on the weekend. （先按早中晚的顺序介绍周六活动）(On ) Saturday morning, I usually play the piano. In the afternoon, I see a movie with my parents . In the evening, I watch TV with my family. I am so happy.（再介绍周日活动）(On ) Sunday morning, I usually do my homework. In the afternoon, I often wash my clothes and sweep the floor. I am so tired. In the evening, I read books and eat some snacks. （总结）This is my busy weekend! How about yours?
注意：第一句可以写成I am busy/happy on the weekend. 或I have a busy/happy weekend.
不能写成 My weekend is happy.
此文句式多样，框架不十分明确，建议有一定语言驾驭能力的学生仿写。
My Weekend
I am a girl. （总起）My weekend is usually very coulorful. （先介绍周六活动）Saturday morning, I usually get up at 7 o'clock. Then I eat breakfast. I do my homework in the morning. I usually I watch TV in the afternoon. Sometimes I read books . I go to bed at 10 o'clock in the evening. （再介绍周日活动）I like Sunday very much . Usually I get up at 7 o'clock and wash my face soon, because I can go hiking on Sunday. I usually climb mountains , have a picnic and swim with my parents. I am very happy. This is my weekend. What about you?
作文七：Last Weekend(一般过去时)
① 此文由上一篇作文My Weekend改编，仅需将动词改成过去式形式，记得要去掉usually/ often/ sometimes 等一般现在时的标志词。
Last Weekend
（总起）I was busy last weekend. （先按早中晚的顺序介绍周六活动）(On ) Saturday morning, I played the piano. In the afternoon, I saw a movie with my parent s . In the evening, I watched TV with my family. I was so happy. （再介绍周日活动）(On ) Sunday morning, I did my homework. In the afternoon, I washed my clothes and swept the floor. I was so tired. In the evening, I read books and ate some snacks. （总结）This was my busy weekend! How about yours?
My Last Weekend
（总起）I had a happy weekend last week. I was very busy. （先按早中晚的顺序介绍周六活动）On Saturday morning, I went to the park with my parents . In the afternoon, I watched TV and went swim ming . In the evening, I cleaned the room and washed cloth es . （再介绍周日活动）On Sunday morning, I went to the cinema and the supermarket. (单数可数名词前面要记得加冠词) After that I
visited my grandparents. In the afternoon，I went to the bookstore by bike and bought some book s . Then I read book s and learned English at home. This was my busy last weekend.
② 同理，如果要求写周末计划，仅需将动词改成be going to形式就可以了。
作文八：Holiday Plan(假期计划)
作文要求：①以写信的格式
②用be going to
Dear mom， （要用逗号哦）
(写信开头寒暄) How are you? (总起) The summer vacation will come. We will have a 2 months holiday. (去哪里where) I ’m gong to Cheng Du. (做什么what) I will visit my grandparents with my parents. We are gong to swim in the sea. And then, I am gong to visit my young friends. (总结) I think we will have a happy time together. I will have a busy holiday.
Yours,
Lucy
Dear Amy,
(写信开头寒暄) How are you, Amy? (总起) I 'm going to Linyi on summer holiday. (第一天) On the first day ，I 'm going to see Xueye Lake. I will take picture there. (第二天) On the second day, I 'm going to visit my grand parents and stay there. (第三天) On the third day, I'm going to my uncle David’s company. And we’re going to play football there. (第四天) On the forth day, I'm going to get back and have a sleep. (总结) My holiday well be busy. What about your holiday?
Yours, Yin Xichang 每句都要用将来时间，红字标出
注意写信格式，绿字标出
作文九：My Bedroom(我的卧室)
用好there be句式，注意就近原则。两篇文章都注意按照一定的顺序描写，值得学习。
My Bedroom
My bedroom is very lovely. In my bedroom, there is a yellow bed. There is a pink clock over the small bed. There is a white closet near the bed, and there are many clothe s in my closet. There is a big window and two blue curtain s west of the closet. My bedroom is small, but I love it very much. This is my small bedroom. What about yours?
My Bedroom
My bedroom is small and nice. First, you can see a big light on the ceiling. Then, you can see a desk near the bookshelf. There are many book s in the bookshelf. The bookshelf is near my bed. There is a lovely bear on my bed. Every night it sleep s with me. I like it very much. I like my bedroom. What about you?
六年级总复习作文总结
作文一：My____ (写一个人)
My Mother
My mother come s from China. She is an accountant. She live s in Jinan. She is thirty-eight years old. She is older than my father. She is 169cm tall. She is taller than me. My mother likes cooking , draw ing pictures and listening to music. Her favourite season is summer, because she likes swim ming in summer. I love my mother!
My Father
My father is thirty-seven years old. He is strong. He is an engineer. He is very strict. Usually he go es to work by car. Sometimes he go es to work by bus. He likes sports. He likes swimming and play ing ping—pang. He likes reading newspaper and books at home. He likes listening to music, too. I like him very much!
作文二：My Family (我的家庭)
My Family
There are three people in my family. They are my dad, my mom and me. (总起) My father is 175cm. He is taller than my mother and me. He is a salesperson. He likes walking , reading books and watching news.（按序先介绍爸爸）My mother is very smart. She is an accountant. Her math is very well. She like s watch ing TV and read ing books.（再介绍妈妈）I like listen ing to music, read ing books and watch ing TV. （最后介绍自己） How interesting! This is my family. I love my family very much! （总结） 最大亮点：句式多样，思路清晰
My Family
There are three people in my family. My father，my mother and I. (总起) I am 12 years old. I live in Jinan. Jinan is beautiful. I like sports , read ing and listen ing to music. I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go by car. （按序先介绍自己） My mother is a teacher. She is very thin. She is kind. She likes read ing . She likes listening to music, too. She goes to work by bus. （再介绍妈妈） My father is an engineer. He is strong. He likes sports. He goes to work by car. （最后介绍爸爸） We are happy. I love my family. （总结）
最大亮点：语言流畅，内容充实
作文三：My Favourite Season (我最喜欢的季节) 本文以夏季的活动为主，易于仿写：
My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, fall and winter. My favourite season is summer, because I can go swimming with my friends . We can eat ice-cream and some fruit s in summer. We also have the summer holiday (暑假) . On the holiday, I can play with my friends. And we can go swimming, play basketball, and go to the park. I think summer is the best(最好的) season of a year. Oh! Summer! I love you! Can you tell me why you are so lovely? (最后一句运用独特的拟人手法，请有选择性地模仿)
本文以春天的景物描写为主：
My Favourite Season
My favourite season is spring, because spring is very beautiful. I can plant tree s in spring. I can go hiking with my family too. In spring the trees become green and the flower s are colorful. There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers . In spring, the sky is very blue. The air is fresh. The clouds are white. Oh! I like spring very much ! (“非常喜欢”这一句型一定记住very much放最后)
作文四：My Pet(描写小动物)
My Pet
I am Cindy. I have a clever pet. It's name is "Snow"（给小宠物起的名字是个不错的选择哦）, because it is a rabbit. It has white fur and two big eye s . It can play with me every day. It can jump very well. Snow likes eat ing some grass and cabbage. It is so cute and smart. I love Snow very much . This is my pet––rabbit Snow.
My Pet
I have a cute pet cat. Its name is Kate. It has black fur（皮毛是不可数名词，不用冠词）, two small ear s , two big eye s and a long tail （注意可数名词的单复数）. It like s drink ing milk and sleeping . It always sleeps all the day. It is so lovely that we all love it very much. It also loves us. I'm happy to stay together with it.
作文五：自我介绍
Hello every one, my name is Sun Chenqianxi(姓和名的首字母分别大写，其余都小写) . I’m 13 years old. I come from ShengLi Street Primary School. I study in Class 5 Grade 6. I like playing the piano, swim ming , go ing hiking and read ing a book. My favourite colour is blue. My favourite food is ice-cream, because is very tasty. My favourite season is summer, because I can eat ice-cream and swim in the sea. It is very funny. My favourite animal is my little dog, she is very lovely.
Hello! My name is Du Chunxue. I’m from China. I’m 12. I’m tall and thin. I have two black and big eye s and long hair. There are 3 people in my family . I have many friend s . I like the cherry very much, because it is sweet. My favourite season is summer, because I can eat ice-cream and it tastes good.(有陈述有原因，很有说服力) The wolf is my favourite animal. I usually get up at 6:00. Then I go to school by car at 7:00. On Saturday morning, I climb mountains with my father sometimes. This is me!
Hello! My name is XXX. I’m slam, but I am strong. I want to be an astronaut ，a teacher or a swimmer. My biggest dream is to be a billionaire. My favourite subject is English. I think English is interesting and easy. My English teacher is very active, kind and smart. I like her class, because in her class I can learn some knowledge. So I’m good at English. I like play ing sport s and read ing book s . My hobby is collect ing lea ves . Do you think I’m a wonderful girl?
作文六：My Weekend(一般现在时)
此文句式统一，便于仿写，绿色为作文框架。
My Weekend
Hello! I’m a girl. （总起）I am busy on the weekend. （先按早中晚的顺序介绍周六活动）(On ) Saturday morning, I usually play the piano. In the afternoon, I see a movie with my parents . In the evening, I watch TV with my family. I am so happy.（再介绍周日活动）(On ) Sunday morning, I usually do my homework. In the afternoon, I often wash my clothes and sweep the floor. I am so tired. In the evening, I read books and eat some snacks. （总结）This is my busy weekend! How about yours?
注意：第一句可以写成I am busy/happy on the weekend. 或I have a busy/happy weekend.
不能写成 My weekend is happy.
此文句式多样，框架不十分明确，建议有一定语言驾驭能力的学生仿写。
My Weekend
I am a girl. （总起）My weekend is usually very coulorful. （先介绍周六活动）Saturday morning, I usually get up at 7 o'clock. Then I eat breakfast. I do my homework in the morning. I usually I watch TV in the afternoon. Sometimes I read books . I go to bed at 10 o'clock in the evening. （再介绍周日活动）I like Sunday very much . Usually I get up at 7 o'clock and wash my face soon, because I can go hiking on Sunday. I usually climb mountains , have a picnic and swim with my parents. I am very happy. This is my weekend. What about you?
作文七：Last Weekend(一般过去时)
① 此文由上一篇作文My Weekend改编，仅需将动词改成过去式形式，记得要去掉usually/ often/ sometimes 等一般现在时的标志词。
Last Weekend
（总起）I was busy last weekend. （先按早中晚的顺序介绍周六活动）(On ) Saturday morning, I played the piano. In the afternoon, I saw a movie with my parent s . In the evening, I watched TV with my family. I was so happy. （再介绍周日活动）(On ) Sunday morning, I did my homework. In the afternoon, I washed my clothes and swept the floor. I was so tired. In the evening, I read books and ate some snacks. （总结）This was my busy weekend! How about yours?
My Last Weekend
（总起）I had a happy weekend last week. I was very busy. （先按早中晚的顺序介绍周六活动）On Saturday morning, I went to the park with my parents . In the afternoon, I watched TV and went swim ming . In the evening, I cleaned the room and washed cloth es . （再介绍周日活动）On Sunday morning, I went to the cinema and the supermarket. (单数可数名词前面要记得加冠词) After that I
visited my grandparents. In the afternoon，I went to the bookstore by bike and bought some book s . Then I read book s and learned English at home. This was my busy last weekend.
② 同理，如果要求写周末计划，仅需将动词改成be going to形式就可以了。
作文八：Holiday Plan(假期计划)
作文要求：①以写信的格式
②用be going to
Dear mom， （要用逗号哦）
(写信开头寒暄) How are you? (总起) The summer vacation will come. We will have a 2 months holiday. (去哪里where) I ’m gong to Cheng Du. (做什么what) I will visit my grandparents with my parents. We are gong to swim in the sea. And then, I am gong to visit my young friends. (总结) I think we will have a happy time together. I will have a busy holiday.
Yours,
Lucy
Dear Amy,
(写信开头寒暄) How are you, Amy? (总起) I 'm going to Linyi on summer holiday. (第一天) On the first day ，I 'm going to see Xueye Lake. I will take picture there. (第二天) On the second day, I 'm going to visit my grand parents and stay there. (第三天) On the third day, I'm going to my uncle David’s company. And we’re going to play football there. (第四天) On the forth day, I'm going to get back and have a sleep. (总结) My holiday well be busy. What about your holiday?
Yours, Yin Xichang 每句都要用将来时间，红字标出
注意写信格式，绿字标出
作文九：My Bedroom(我的卧室)
用好there be句式，注意就近原则。两篇文章都注意按照一定的顺序描写，值得学习。
My Bedroom
My bedroom is very lovely. In my bedroom, there is a yellow bed. There is a pink clock over the small bed. There is a white closet near the bed, and there are many clothe s in my closet. There is a big window and two blue curtain s west of the closet. My bedroom is small, but I love it very much. This is my small bedroom. What about yours?
My Bedroom
My bedroom is small and nice. First, you can see a big light on the ceiling. Then, you can see a desk near the bookshelf. There are many book s in the bookshelf. The bookshelf is near my bed. There is a lovely bear on my bed. Every night it sleep s with me. I like it very much. I like my bedroom. What about you?