四级写作套路
四、六级作文的几种写作套路
根据对历年四、六级作文实考题的分析,我们归纳了以下几种写作套路,以帮助作文基础不太好的学生理清思路,不至于拿起笔无话可写,也不至于下笔离题万里。这些套路在教学实践中是可行的但不是完美的,恰当使用这些套路的关键在于灵活运用而不是生搬硬套。
1套路一 观点辩论型
这类作文在四、六级考试中频繁出现,一般都在给出标题的同时,在提纲或提示中指出:(对某一问题)有人认为……,还有人认为……,你认为……;或者,(对某种情况)有一种观点是……,你的观点是……。
这类作文可以按照提纲作文的分析思路,确定文章的主要内容是通过与不同观点的辩论,来阐明自己的观点。在方法上,1、你可以在不同观点中选择一个自己支持的观点, 并阐述理由;2、你也可以在概述别人观点以后给出自己的不同观点或折中观点,并加以说明。在布局上,一般要将文章在总体上安排成开头、中间、结尾三个部分。
Sample 1
My View on Opportunities
There is no consensus of opinion in society about___. There are some people who believe that ___. Others, however, argue that ___. As far as I am concerned, I am on the side of ___ with following reasons.
One reason for this is that ___. Another reason is that ___. One strong reason for my argument is that ___.
In a word, I believe that___.
Sample 2
Where to Live While at College
When it comes to __, different ___ have different answers due to their ___. Some ___ because ___. Others, however, contradict this idea. From their point of view, ___.
Personally, I am in favor of ___ opinion as a result of the following considerations.To begin with,___. Next___ . Last but not the least , ___.
Based on the above discussion, it is not difficult to draw a conclusion that ___ outweighs ___. Of course, there is no gainsaying that ___, but as far as I am concerned, I ___.
(economical. life outside campus is more comfortable and exciting. Take classes as example, if the class begins at 8, you just have to get up at 7 and you can have the atmosphere of academic life since lectures, seminars and forums are around you. outside campus. students should not live outside, )
2套路二 现象剖析型
这类作文多为提纲作文,其特点为:先要描述一种现象,然后剖析该现象的优点、缺点或该现象存在的原因,最后表明你的看法或解决问题的措施和建议。 Sample 1
Positive and Negative Aspects of Motorcycles
___ enjoy some advantages ___. Above all, _____. Moreover, ___. Last but not the least, ____. In conclusion, ___.
However, the disadvantages of ___ cannot be ignored. The biggest problem is ___. Studies have proved that ___. Besides, ___. And it should be pointed out ___, thus ___. Needless to say, ____.
It can be safely predicted that ___. But this trend will ___ ___. In a
word, ___.
(1) 优点(advantages, positive aspects, merits )
(2) 缺点(disadvantages, negative aspects, demerits )
(3) 观点(attitudes, opinions, views; prediction)
3套路三:寻求方法型
这类作文也多以提纲作文出现,或以图表作文的形式出现。若是提纲作文,模式一般为:提出问题;分析多种方法, 或多种因素;找出适合自己的方法或得出结论,这一部分应是文章的重点。若是图表作文,则参照图表作文的写法,先描述,再分析,最后结论。
Sample 1
How to Face up to Your Difficulties
Life is not always full of____. Every person has his own difficulties no matter how_____. So it is of vital importance to_______.
Some people feel_____; others resort to______; still others______.
The positive method is to_____.
(position or how great his achievement is. have a correct attitude to face up to difficulties. these people don't use their abilities to overcome
difficulties. So their attitudes are negative. rather than run away from them. Confront difficulties with joyful energy and enthusiasm, and you will find the difficulties are really not so hard as they appear and they will disappear in due course.)
Sample 2
How to Find a Good Job
How to_____? According to my experience, I think you should at least take the following factors into consideration.
One factor is _____. Another factor is _____. Still another factor is that ______.
To sum up, when you ______, you should consider _______.
(ambitious and want to make an achievement in careers, and usually the best way to do this is that you like the job. Only if you are interested in what you do, can you put your whole energy into it, and therefore, you are likely to succeed in your field of work. done. To live more comfortably is a part of human nature and to realize this needs enough money. A good job usually offers a good salary. So it is inevitable to take salary into account when we choose our careers.
the job you are hunting for should have a good prospect. Our society
changes rapidly and today's good job may not be the good one tomorrow. Therefore, while choosing our jobs, we should never forget the potential power of the job you are looking for. prospect.
4套路四:概念阐述型
这类作文考查考生对格言警句或某个抽象理念的理解,一般是提纲作文。写作的模式是先阐释自己对所给概念的理解,再通过例证的方法论证其蕴含的道理,最后将自己对格言、警句的理解与现实生活结合,画龙点睛,结束文章。
Sample 1
A Fall into the Pit, a Gain in Your Wit(吃一堑,长一智)
Just as the proverb says,_____. The most important thing in our life is not to _____, but to_____.
Take_____ for example. ______ once attached too much importance on _____ without_____. Consequently, _____. To our relief, _______ has taken immediate remedial measures to _____. I believe that______.
When we already have made some mistakes, it's no use complaining about ____, instead,______.
Just as the proverb says,
Take China's development for example. China once attached too much importance on economic development without paying sufficient attention to the conservation of natural resources. Consequently, serious issues on environmental deterioration emerged in succession(接踵而至). To our relief, the Chinese government has taken immediate remedial measures to
achieve sustainable development. I believe that in the near future, we can see an economically prosperous China living in harmony with the nature. When we already have made some mistakes, it's no use complaining about the surroundings or dwelling too much on the past, instead, we should
draw lessons from our mistakes and try to make improvement in the future. Sample 2
What Is Success?
What is ____? Different people might give different answers to this question. Some people think that_____. Other people think that______. Still some others consider______.
However, ______. In my opinion, ______.
To ____, we should _______.
(What is success? Different people might give different answers to this question. Some people think that one is successful if he can make a great
deal of money. Other people think that success means holding an
important government post. Still some others consider one who has got a high academic title as a success.
However, I don't think that money, power, or status is the symbol of success. In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one's specialty, making contribution to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people.
To become successful men in the true sense, we should be both
perseverant and industrious. We should keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to success. If we follow these principles, we can certainly achieve success in the future.)
5套路五:图表作文
图表作文的写法在前面已经有所叙述,其基本模式为:1、描述图表;2、分析变化原因;3、给出结论、建议等。
Sample 1
Rapid Development of Tourism in China
The above graphs display ______ with _____. We can see during the period from ____ to ___ witnessed a dramatic increase in _____. In the same period, _____.
There are several factors attributed to ______. First, _____. Second, _____. Finally, thanks to ____, For all those reasons, people now have found _____.
The above graphs make it easy to draw a conclusion that . . . If this trend continues, _____.
考生在写作图表作文时,容易犯以下错误,如:
1、描述的图表内容过细,以至于掌握不住重点,总结不出规律;
2、不会进行对比、比较,单纯地描述图表,找不出要阐述的问题;
3、图表描述的句型单一,用词不当等。
这里推荐一些图表类作文常用的词汇及句型:
开头段(描述图表)句型
1) The table(表格)/chart(图表)/line graph(线条图) /bar chart(柱状图)/pie chart(饼状图)/curve graph(曲线图)shows/ indicates/ illustrat es/ presents that …
2) It can be seen from the chart / diagram / graph that…
3) As is revealed in the table…
4) We can see from the chart / diagram / graph that…
5) 上升\下降:The table shows/ indicates a steady/ dramatic/ gradual/ rapid rise/ increase / decline/ decrease/ fall in…
…increase/ rise/ ascend/ go up/ climb/grow/ decrease/ decline/ drop to/ from…to… 主体段(分析图表)
中间段
6) 在数量、比例方面占…:occupy/ account for/ make up/ constitute/ gain the percentage of/ consume the largest portion…
7) 多于/少于:A outnumbers B/ A be more than B/ A be less than B
8) 表示倍数:A be 3 times as much/ many as B/ A be 3 times more than B
9) 相比:by contrast/ on the contrary/ compared with/ It reflects the great differences that exist between…/ When we compared…, we see…
10) 占主导地位:dominate/ the dominance of…
11) 最高点/最低点:the highest/ the top/ the summit/ the peak/ the bottom/ the least/ the lowest point
12) 平均:mean/ average
13) 趋势:tendency/ trend/ inclination/ The graph reflects several trends/ A very noticeable trend was the steady decrease in…
14) There are several reasons for the increase/decrease ... Firstly ...
15) Several factors may contribute to this change. First ... Second ... 结尾段
16) The above graphs make it easy to draw a conclusion that . . .
17) From the chart / diagram / graph we can have an understanding of…
18) Therefore, we can infer that ...
19) To sum up, the graph suggests…
20) From the curve/diagram, we can conclude .../ it can be safely
concluded that…
21) From the curve, we can conclude ...
There Is No End to Learning A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they graduate from their schools. Obviously, they fail to take into account the basic fact that there is no end to learning. First of all, it is universally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate. Even the
best possible graduate needs to continue learning before he or she becomes an educated person. Furthermore, as a famous saying goes, education is not complete with graduation. A college degree can never ensure long-time job success. Maintaining success in a job depends on education after graduation. Most importantly, learning is rewarding both materially and spiritually by enriching our life and perfecting our personality. In a word, learning is an invaluable career worth our life-long pursuit. No one should be content with just high school or college education.
写作指南:
是一篇分析性议论文,结合“教育不能随毕业结束”这句话,对文章主题“学无止境”进行分析。可安排如下:
1. 概述现象,引出下文讨论的话题“学习没有止境”。
2. 从几方面论述为什么学习没有止境。
3. 总结全文。
Translation
Online shopping is a new shopping mode increasing popular in China in recent years. People search for goods they want in shopping websites, then make electronic orders and pay online. The sellers deliver
commodities to customers’ homes via the express company. The major groups who shopped online were primarily university students and white collars. At present, the great majority of netizens have the experience of shopping online. In the last decade, the number of shopping websites has increased tremendously and the commodities sold online become more colorful by the day. Some people hold that convenience and low price are important reasons for the rapid development of online shopping.
四级写作套路
四、六级作文的几种写作套路
根据对历年四、六级作文实考题的分析,我们归纳了以下几种写作套路,以帮助作文基础不太好的学生理清思路,不至于拿起笔无话可写,也不至于下笔离题万里。这些套路在教学实践中是可行的但不是完美的,恰当使用这些套路的关键在于灵活运用而不是生搬硬套。
1套路一 观点辩论型
这类作文在四、六级考试中频繁出现,一般都在给出标题的同时,在提纲或提示中指出:(对某一问题)有人认为……,还有人认为……,你认为……;或者,(对某种情况)有一种观点是……,你的观点是……。
这类作文可以按照提纲作文的分析思路,确定文章的主要内容是通过与不同观点的辩论,来阐明自己的观点。在方法上,1、你可以在不同观点中选择一个自己支持的观点, 并阐述理由;2、你也可以在概述别人观点以后给出自己的不同观点或折中观点,并加以说明。在布局上,一般要将文章在总体上安排成开头、中间、结尾三个部分。
Sample 1
My View on Opportunities
There is no consensus of opinion in society about___. There are some people who believe that ___. Others, however, argue that ___. As far as I am concerned, I am on the side of ___ with following reasons.
One reason for this is that ___. Another reason is that ___. One strong reason for my argument is that ___.
In a word, I believe that___.
Sample 2
Where to Live While at College
When it comes to __, different ___ have different answers due to their ___. Some ___ because ___. Others, however, contradict this idea. From their point of view, ___.
Personally, I am in favor of ___ opinion as a result of the following considerations.To begin with,___. Next___ . Last but not the least , ___.
Based on the above discussion, it is not difficult to draw a conclusion that ___ outweighs ___. Of course, there is no gainsaying that ___, but as far as I am concerned, I ___.
(economical. life outside campus is more comfortable and exciting. Take classes as example, if the class begins at 8, you just have to get up at 7 and you can have the atmosphere of academic life since lectures, seminars and forums are around you. outside campus. students should not live outside, )
2套路二 现象剖析型
这类作文多为提纲作文,其特点为:先要描述一种现象,然后剖析该现象的优点、缺点或该现象存在的原因,最后表明你的看法或解决问题的措施和建议。 Sample 1
Positive and Negative Aspects of Motorcycles
___ enjoy some advantages ___. Above all, _____. Moreover, ___. Last but not the least, ____. In conclusion, ___.
However, the disadvantages of ___ cannot be ignored. The biggest problem is ___. Studies have proved that ___. Besides, ___. And it should be pointed out ___, thus ___. Needless to say, ____.
It can be safely predicted that ___. But this trend will ___ ___. In a
word, ___.
(1) 优点(advantages, positive aspects, merits )
(2) 缺点(disadvantages, negative aspects, demerits )
(3) 观点(attitudes, opinions, views; prediction)
3套路三:寻求方法型
这类作文也多以提纲作文出现,或以图表作文的形式出现。若是提纲作文,模式一般为:提出问题;分析多种方法, 或多种因素;找出适合自己的方法或得出结论,这一部分应是文章的重点。若是图表作文,则参照图表作文的写法,先描述,再分析,最后结论。
Sample 1
How to Face up to Your Difficulties
Life is not always full of____. Every person has his own difficulties no matter how_____. So it is of vital importance to_______.
Some people feel_____; others resort to______; still others______.
The positive method is to_____.
(position or how great his achievement is. have a correct attitude to face up to difficulties. these people don't use their abilities to overcome
difficulties. So their attitudes are negative. rather than run away from them. Confront difficulties with joyful energy and enthusiasm, and you will find the difficulties are really not so hard as they appear and they will disappear in due course.)
Sample 2
How to Find a Good Job
How to_____? According to my experience, I think you should at least take the following factors into consideration.
One factor is _____. Another factor is _____. Still another factor is that ______.
To sum up, when you ______, you should consider _______.
(ambitious and want to make an achievement in careers, and usually the best way to do this is that you like the job. Only if you are interested in what you do, can you put your whole energy into it, and therefore, you are likely to succeed in your field of work. done. To live more comfortably is a part of human nature and to realize this needs enough money. A good job usually offers a good salary. So it is inevitable to take salary into account when we choose our careers.
the job you are hunting for should have a good prospect. Our society
changes rapidly and today's good job may not be the good one tomorrow. Therefore, while choosing our jobs, we should never forget the potential power of the job you are looking for. prospect.
4套路四:概念阐述型
这类作文考查考生对格言警句或某个抽象理念的理解,一般是提纲作文。写作的模式是先阐释自己对所给概念的理解,再通过例证的方法论证其蕴含的道理,最后将自己对格言、警句的理解与现实生活结合,画龙点睛,结束文章。
Sample 1
A Fall into the Pit, a Gain in Your Wit(吃一堑,长一智)
Just as the proverb says,_____. The most important thing in our life is not to _____, but to_____.
Take_____ for example. ______ once attached too much importance on _____ without_____. Consequently, _____. To our relief, _______ has taken immediate remedial measures to _____. I believe that______.
When we already have made some mistakes, it's no use complaining about ____, instead,______.
Just as the proverb says,
Take China's development for example. China once attached too much importance on economic development without paying sufficient attention to the conservation of natural resources. Consequently, serious issues on environmental deterioration emerged in succession(接踵而至). To our relief, the Chinese government has taken immediate remedial measures to
achieve sustainable development. I believe that in the near future, we can see an economically prosperous China living in harmony with the nature. When we already have made some mistakes, it's no use complaining about the surroundings or dwelling too much on the past, instead, we should
draw lessons from our mistakes and try to make improvement in the future. Sample 2
What Is Success?
What is ____? Different people might give different answers to this question. Some people think that_____. Other people think that______. Still some others consider______.
However, ______. In my opinion, ______.
To ____, we should _______.
(What is success? Different people might give different answers to this question. Some people think that one is successful if he can make a great
deal of money. Other people think that success means holding an
important government post. Still some others consider one who has got a high academic title as a success.
However, I don't think that money, power, or status is the symbol of success. In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one's specialty, making contribution to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people.
To become successful men in the true sense, we should be both
perseverant and industrious. We should keep in mind that perseverance is the mother of success and industry is the key to success. If we follow these principles, we can certainly achieve success in the future.)
5套路五:图表作文
图表作文的写法在前面已经有所叙述,其基本模式为:1、描述图表;2、分析变化原因;3、给出结论、建议等。
Sample 1
Rapid Development of Tourism in China
The above graphs display ______ with _____. We can see during the period from ____ to ___ witnessed a dramatic increase in _____. In the same period, _____.
There are several factors attributed to ______. First, _____. Second, _____. Finally, thanks to ____, For all those reasons, people now have found _____.
The above graphs make it easy to draw a conclusion that . . . If this trend continues, _____.
考生在写作图表作文时,容易犯以下错误,如:
1、描述的图表内容过细,以至于掌握不住重点,总结不出规律;
2、不会进行对比、比较,单纯地描述图表,找不出要阐述的问题;
3、图表描述的句型单一,用词不当等。
这里推荐一些图表类作文常用的词汇及句型:
开头段(描述图表)句型
1) The table(表格)/chart(图表)/line graph(线条图) /bar chart(柱状图)/pie chart(饼状图)/curve graph(曲线图)shows/ indicates/ illustrat es/ presents that …
2) It can be seen from the chart / diagram / graph that…
3) As is revealed in the table…
4) We can see from the chart / diagram / graph that…
5) 上升\下降:The table shows/ indicates a steady/ dramatic/ gradual/ rapid rise/ increase / decline/ decrease/ fall in…
…increase/ rise/ ascend/ go up/ climb/grow/ decrease/ decline/ drop to/ from…to… 主体段(分析图表)
中间段
6) 在数量、比例方面占…:occupy/ account for/ make up/ constitute/ gain the percentage of/ consume the largest portion…
7) 多于/少于:A outnumbers B/ A be more than B/ A be less than B
8) 表示倍数:A be 3 times as much/ many as B/ A be 3 times more than B
9) 相比:by contrast/ on the contrary/ compared with/ It reflects the great differences that exist between…/ When we compared…, we see…
10) 占主导地位:dominate/ the dominance of…
11) 最高点/最低点:the highest/ the top/ the summit/ the peak/ the bottom/ the least/ the lowest point
12) 平均:mean/ average
13) 趋势:tendency/ trend/ inclination/ The graph reflects several trends/ A very noticeable trend was the steady decrease in…
14) There are several reasons for the increase/decrease ... Firstly ...
15) Several factors may contribute to this change. First ... Second ... 结尾段
16) The above graphs make it easy to draw a conclusion that . . .
17) From the chart / diagram / graph we can have an understanding of…
18) Therefore, we can infer that ...
19) To sum up, the graph suggests…
20) From the curve/diagram, we can conclude .../ it can be safely
concluded that…
21) From the curve, we can conclude ...
There Is No End to Learning A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they graduate from their schools. Obviously, they fail to take into account the basic fact that there is no end to learning. First of all, it is universally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate. Even the
best possible graduate needs to continue learning before he or she becomes an educated person. Furthermore, as a famous saying goes, education is not complete with graduation. A college degree can never ensure long-time job success. Maintaining success in a job depends on education after graduation. Most importantly, learning is rewarding both materially and spiritually by enriching our life and perfecting our personality. In a word, learning is an invaluable career worth our life-long pursuit. No one should be content with just high school or college education.
写作指南:
是一篇分析性议论文,结合“教育不能随毕业结束”这句话,对文章主题“学无止境”进行分析。可安排如下:
1. 概述现象,引出下文讨论的话题“学习没有止境”。
2. 从几方面论述为什么学习没有止境。
3. 总结全文。
Translation
Online shopping is a new shopping mode increasing popular in China in recent years. People search for goods they want in shopping websites, then make electronic orders and pay online. The sellers deliver
commodities to customers’ homes via the express company. The major groups who shopped online were primarily university students and white collars. At present, the great majority of netizens have the experience of shopping online. In the last decade, the number of shopping websites has increased tremendously and the commodities sold online become more colorful by the day. Some people hold that convenience and low price are important reasons for the rapid development of online shopping.