2015届高三英语作文 学案 5
----徐汇区 二模作文
假设今年暑假，你准备去某地做一次故地重游的旅行，并准备带上你的朋友们一起去。请写一篇文章介绍你的旅行计划，主要包括以下内容： ● 准备去什么地方
● 故地重游的原因
● 本次计划如何开展
● 希望做些什么准备
● ……
审题： During summer vacation, I will revisit…
To broaden our horizons (e.g. to learn the culture/ history/ custom, to appreciate the scenery…)
To make up for the previous experience (e.g. I missed… during last visit) To cherish the memory of…
… The schedule/ itinerary Clothing, food, accommodation, transportation
1) With the summer holidays approaching, I am looking forward to travellingto X
with my friends (to relieve the heavy burden of my study/ to embrace Chinese ancient culture/…)
用来表示渴望去旅游的词语： long to travel to...; look forward to traveling; be desperate to travel...
2) As one of the …, it has a long/ rich history… as well as…, which makes it the
best choice.
3) I’m going to spend my summer vacation in X with… to… 1) I can still remember that…
Since time was limited, we didn’t… As a result, I think it necessary and appealing to visit X again for the purpose of…
2) Due to the tight schedule of travel, we failed to visit the most beautiful… but
the views elsewhere really impressed me deeply so that an idea occurred to me that I might as well visit X again!
3) It’s a great pity for me that I had a guided tour to X last time, and consequently
I wasted much time on… and didn’t have enough time to approach the local culture. As a result, this time, I’ll make a detailed plan and enjoy more free and relaxing time. 1) To have a better understanding of X, we’ll choose to live with a host family
where we will be introduced to …
2) To ensure that our trip goes well, we have to make some necessary
preparations in advance. We should … so that we can contact each other at any time. Some medicines will… in case we…
3) The first site will be… The next stop will be… Going shopping will never be
replaced during the trip. 1) To embrace the wonderful trip, we should apply for visas at least one month in
advance. Summer sun can burn skin in minutes, and therefore we should prepare sunscreen to protect our skin from the sun’s rays. … I just can’t wait to go there.
2) … and… are necessities. … will be needed as well. More importantly, we
must hold our visas when entering…
I suggest that we start preparing soon after Gaokao.
Get fully prepared and we will have a wonderful trip to….
PS: style：非议论文（不要写成工作报告，第一第二…）
词汇激活：
地方描写角度：视觉、听觉等
描述地点的形容词：
attractive, colorful, splendid（壮观的）, impressive, magnificent, fascinating, lively, wonderful, breathtaking scenery (壮观的), legendary (传奇的), haunting (令人难忘的，萦绕心头的), delightful,
e.g. I was fascinated by the magnificence of the mountains.
The town is hauntingly beautiful 美得令人难以忘怀
… the haunting calls of wild birds in the tree 令人难忘的鸟鸣声
描述经历的形容词： enjoyable, pleasant, memorable, unmissable (不容错过的), unforgettable…
范文精选
范文精选 (一）
With the summer holidays approaching, I am looking forward to travelling with
my friends to relieve the great burden of study now. Actually I’ve already worked out a plan for a trip to Nanjing, which we visited two years ago.
I can still remember that our last visit to Nanjing didn’t end up with joy and happiness. Since time was limited, we were more like being pushed all the time than traveling. As a result, I think it necessary and appealing to visit Nanjing again, for the purpose of filling our memories.
Nanjing is a place with a great number of tourist attractions, so it may take 3 days to get a thorough view of it. Places among our list to visit are Fuzi Temple. Nanjing University, Zongtong Fu and so on. I believe we can relax ourselves and enjoy the beautiful view of Nanjing.
To ensure that our trip goes well, we have to make some necessary preparations in advance. We should remember every member’s telephone numbers so that we can contact each other at any time. Before departure, we must prepare some medicines if someone needs them.
All in all, I hope that this trip will be a piece of memory for us to keep forever.
范文精选 (二）
On account of the unforgettable visit to the Western Lake three years ago, I intend to pay a visit to it again with my friends this summer holiday.
,Hangzhou primarily its magnificent Western stories. We can appreciate the fantastic scenery while wandering along the bank,with breeze blowing gently through our hair.The sunshine there will also wrap us warmly,which really makes it difficult for you to resist the temptation,doesn’t it?
Then,it’s time to discuss the plan in detail.In terms of my intent ion,the whole journey will last 2 weeks. I will divide my friends into two groups to better take care of each other. We will have a clear timetable to ensure everyday project. Certainly,what we should do first is to reserve a hotel in advance and surf the Internet to figure out our routes. What’s more,a local map is also essential. Wish us a pleasant trip!
2015届高三英语作文 学案 5
----徐汇区 二模作文
假设今年暑假，你准备去某地做一次故地重游的旅行，并准备带上你的朋友们一起去。请写一篇文章介绍你的旅行计划，主要包括以下内容： ● 准备去什么地方
● 故地重游的原因
● 本次计划如何开展
● 希望做些什么准备
● ……
审题： During summer vacation, I will revisit…
To broaden our horizons (e.g. to learn the culture/ history/ custom, to appreciate the scenery…)
To make up for the previous experience (e.g. I missed… during last visit) To cherish the memory of…
… The schedule/ itinerary Clothing, food, accommodation, transportation
1) With the summer holidays approaching, I am looking forward to travellingto X
with my friends (to relieve the heavy burden of my study/ to embrace Chinese ancient culture/…)
用来表示渴望去旅游的词语： long to travel to...; look forward to traveling; be desperate to travel...
2) As one of the …, it has a long/ rich history… as well as…, which makes it the
best choice.
3) I’m going to spend my summer vacation in X with… to… 1) I can still remember that…
Since time was limited, we didn’t… As a result, I think it necessary and appealing to visit X again for the purpose of…
2) Due to the tight schedule of travel, we failed to visit the most beautiful… but
the views elsewhere really impressed me deeply so that an idea occurred to me that I might as well visit X again!
3) It’s a great pity for me that I had a guided tour to X last time, and consequently
I wasted much time on… and didn’t have enough time to approach the local culture. As a result, this time, I’ll make a detailed plan and enjoy more free and relaxing time. 1) To have a better understanding of X, we’ll choose to live with a host family
where we will be introduced to …
2) To ensure that our trip goes well, we have to make some necessary
preparations in advance. We should … so that we can contact each other at any time. Some medicines will… in case we…
3) The first site will be… The next stop will be… Going shopping will never be
replaced during the trip. 1) To embrace the wonderful trip, we should apply for visas at least one month in
advance. Summer sun can burn skin in minutes, and therefore we should prepare sunscreen to protect our skin from the sun’s rays. … I just can’t wait to go there.
2) … and… are necessities. … will be needed as well. More importantly, we
must hold our visas when entering…
I suggest that we start preparing soon after Gaokao.
Get fully prepared and we will have a wonderful trip to….
PS: style：非议论文（不要写成工作报告，第一第二…）
词汇激活：
地方描写角度：视觉、听觉等
描述地点的形容词：
attractive, colorful, splendid（壮观的）, impressive, magnificent, fascinating, lively, wonderful, breathtaking scenery (壮观的), legendary (传奇的), haunting (令人难忘的，萦绕心头的), delightful,
e.g. I was fascinated by the magnificence of the mountains.
The town is hauntingly beautiful 美得令人难以忘怀
… the haunting calls of wild birds in the tree 令人难忘的鸟鸣声
描述经历的形容词： enjoyable, pleasant, memorable, unmissable (不容错过的), unforgettable…
范文精选
范文精选 (一）
With the summer holidays approaching, I am looking forward to travelling with
my friends to relieve the great burden of study now. Actually I’ve already worked out a plan for a trip to Nanjing, which we visited two years ago.
I can still remember that our last visit to Nanjing didn’t end up with joy and happiness. Since time was limited, we were more like being pushed all the time than traveling. As a result, I think it necessary and appealing to visit Nanjing again, for the purpose of filling our memories.
Nanjing is a place with a great number of tourist attractions, so it may take 3 days to get a thorough view of it. Places among our list to visit are Fuzi Temple. Nanjing University, Zongtong Fu and so on. I believe we can relax ourselves and enjoy the beautiful view of Nanjing.
To ensure that our trip goes well, we have to make some necessary preparations in advance. We should remember every member’s telephone numbers so that we can contact each other at any time. Before departure, we must prepare some medicines if someone needs them.
All in all, I hope that this trip will be a piece of memory for us to keep forever.
范文精选 (二）
On account of the unforgettable visit to the Western Lake three years ago, I intend to pay a visit to it again with my friends this summer holiday.
,Hangzhou primarily its magnificent Western stories. We can appreciate the fantastic scenery while wandering along the bank,with breeze blowing gently through our hair.The sunshine there will also wrap us warmly,which really makes it difficult for you to resist the temptation,doesn’t it?
Then,it’s time to discuss the plan in detail.In terms of my intent ion,the whole journey will last 2 weeks. I will divide my friends into two groups to better take care of each other. We will have a clear timetable to ensure everyday project. Certainly,what we should do first is to reserve a hotel in advance and surf the Internet to figure out our routes. What’s more,a local map is also essential. Wish us a pleasant trip!